| 5 |
Originality |
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I thought the idea for this story was interesting
but the author didn't develope it at all. |
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| 10 |
"Trueness" to the show |
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Daria would be a little more hesitant going into
anything with Trent. Jane seemed like Jane. Quinn and Trent
were non-existant. |
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| 5 |
Fits the title |
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The author took it literally, but she was never
in Wonderland. |
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| 5 |
Spelling, grammer, punctuation |
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The story wasn't really clear. One minute they're
in class, the next they're out of class, it's the next day...the
end. |
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| 5 |
Humour |
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Wasn't all that funny. |
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| 5 |
Over-all impression |
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If you could do this, I'd say have the author
go back and do the entry again. It was too short and needed
work. |
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| 35 |
Total Score |